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One Piece PETs: First Time


(I DO NOT, NOR WILL I EVER, OWN THE TWO CHARACTERS IN THIS FIC! SAME GOES FOR THE AU OF PETs!!!)





  It was a bright and sunny day, our ship was docked at a nearby island and everyone but Luffy and myself left to go shopping or just explore the island. I was rocking my sexy polka-dot bikini (not like that dumb song) top, a pair of denim blue booty shorts, and a pair of open-toed boots, sitting on the railings of the Sunny, eating a tangerine-flavored popsicle, and looking out at the ocean. Such a wonderful site, the breeze was good, too. I inhaled the scent and let out a sigh of contentment.


  So peaceful...unfortunately my moment of tranquility was interrupted by the sound of my captain's loud chewing. I turned and saw him, sitting on one of the sun chairs, and sloppily eating a piece of meat. Dear Ceiling Cat, that guy has no manners at all! He's a glutton, he can be a real dumbass sometimes, and do I even have to explain how selfish he can be?! AAAAAUUUUUUGH!


  Despite all that, he does have some good traits, mind you. He's such an optimist, always seeing the good side of things, always so loyal, willing to do anything for the people he cares about...me, especially. He's honest (even when he's not trying to be) and so trustworthy, and was always able to bring even the most gloomy of people out of their shell.


Plus, having rock-hard, six-pack abs never hurt anyone.


  I have always admired all of those things about Luffy. You could even say that I've fallen in love with him...and I have.


...do not tell anyone I said that.


  I wanted that fool so badly, though. Then an idea popped into my head, a devious grin crept it's way onto my face as I looked at Luffy who was still eating. To get his attention, I started sucking on my popsicle in a very provocative manner. He stopped eating and sees me, seconds later he just shrugged it off and went back to eating his food.


  That really pissed me off. However, I remained calm and decided to try again. Only this time I removed part of my top, slighty exposing my right breast, walked over to him and sat on his lap, looking up at him with big, cute, soulful eyes, and still sucking on my popsicle in a very provocative manner.


"So what's up, Nami?" he asks with his mouth full...ew. Anyways, he immediately noticed my right boob.


'Got ya!'


He swallowed. "Nami, you're boob's showing." He covered it back up.


"There ya go." he smiled and went back to eating...that was when I finally snapped. I pulled his head to my face and shout:


"YOU IDIOT! CAN'T YOU UNDERSTAND THE SIGNALS I'VE BEEN GIVING YOU?! I WANT YOU TO F*** ME!"


"...you do? Well, why didn't you just say so?" he asked.


'So all that was for nothing?' I'm thinking.


***Approximately an hour and thirty minutes later***


  Luffy and I were both on my bed, butt naked, hair slightly messy. He was eating some more meat and I was working on one of my maps, while eating a tangerine. The others wouldn't be back for a while and that was fine. I really enjoyed being here with Luffy like this.


"Nami."


"Hmm?"


"Can I be on top, next time?" he asks me.


A pause.


"Sure...as long as you behave."
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One Piece PETs: First Time
by moonlitinuyasha1985
Rating: M
Pairing: LuffyxNami
Summary: Our dear navigator wants her captain. Takes place pre-timeskip.





My version of PETs, One Piece style (Actually, the focus is LuNa, but whatever.)! Yes, it's LuNa, and I get that most people are not fans of the pairing or any pairings in One Piece in general because Oda-sama said no romance, and you know what? I am just fine with that. That don't stop me from loving the couple, however.;)

:iconxfangheartx: helped me write this out, so most of the credit belongs to her.:aww:

Put the mature tag on just to be on the safe side. I do, however, have an uncensored version of this. It will be posted on another site, if you want the link, note me and I will send it to you.

Nami - Booted Puss tyrackwolfii.deviantart.com/ar…
Luffy - Black-capped Capuchin Monkey Man xfangheartx.deviantart.com/art…

The PETs AU, as well as Nami's Booted Puss design belongs to :icontyrackwolfii:
Luffy and Nami belong to Eiichiro Oda
The fic belongs to :iconxfangheartx: & moi.
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:iconmzhamma:
mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You know, I have to say, I could actually see this happening in the manga if Oda were to actually have some romantic/erotic parts in his manga.

I got to say, I really like this kind of story. Gives you just enough material at the beginning and ending that you can paint a pretty good picture of happened between the two of them in your mind. Plus it also allows some freedom for the reader; they can just imagine exactly what happened between the two of them and that can more pleasing than reading what someone else wrote.

Bonus points for me because it is one of my favorite pairings. Would you do something like this with other pairings you like?

On a side note, I know Oda said there would not be any romance, but that does not seem entirely true to me as there had to some romance between Roger and Rogue otherwise how they could have conceived Ace?
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jul 3, 2017
Thank you, though lately I've been thinking about revamping this.


Never thought of doing that with other pairings...


That is a very good question. :iconthinkplz:
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:iconmzhamma:
mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome! I understand how that feels; after you have written something and let it sit for a while, you feel like your skills have improved and write something better, correct?

Does that mean you are considering doing it?

I think what he meant by that statement is that there would be no actual romance (i.e. dates, making out). I think the most we would ever see would be cheesy confessions, like what Sanji does, and the results like the birth of Ace, if you catch my drift.
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moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2017
Correct. ^^


...I don't know.


I do, Mz. :D
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:iconmzhamma:
mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
So it's kind of 50/50 about writing something like this for other couples correct?
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017
Dude, I just said that I don't know.
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:iconmzhamma:
mzhamma Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry.... ^^;
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2017
It's fine.
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Banfantan Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
;) (Wink) 
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2015
:wink: rvmp


TY for faving, btw.
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mariox357 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
can you send me a link
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2014
I can't, since I don't wanna get banned.


It's up at Archive Of Our Own.
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desertLaceroses Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh my gosh xD haha I love this!
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
Thanks!


Thanks for faving, too!
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:icondesertlaceroses:
desertLaceroses Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! ^0^
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:icondesertlaceroses:
desertLaceroses Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:meow:
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:icondesertlaceroses:
desertLaceroses Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconkittenplz:
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:iconartman179:
Artman179 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
(Sighs) Luffy is so dense :no:

Anyways, sexy story! :heart:
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Thanks for faving, too!:hug::
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:iconartman179:
Artman179 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Pleasure's all mine ^^
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
Hai.:iconsadnod:



Thank you!:hug:



You should check out the uncut version on my archive account.;)
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:iconartman179:
Artman179 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Your very welcome :hug:

I will take a look now :D
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014
:hug:



Yay!:w00t:
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:iconnarutoeatsasuke:
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
lolz.  only luffy  would  be  nonchalant  about   it  XD
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014
Yup.:XD:
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:iconnarutoeatsasuke:
narutoEATsasuke Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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:iconfeathery-blue-otaku:
feathery-blue-otaku Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
staaaaaaare! XD nice~!
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner May 28, 2014
Thanks.


Thanks for faving.
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Luffysta Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Luffy on top XD

Great fic! :) 
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner May 21, 2014
Yes.:XD:


Thanks!:)
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MirandNack Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist
Ahaha! You write Luffy really well xD

And, if I'm to be honest, I think you're right that Nami would be dominant- until he got the hang of it and then he'd OWN it (;
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
Thank you!:hug:


Mm-hmm~.;)
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MirandNack Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014  Hobbyist
No problem :)
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D0LPHINTAIL Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Very nice. I sure wish I could find myself in that kind of situation. Only I wouldn't take her to the bed but somewhere much more magicial to please her. <3 :)
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2014
Thanks.:D


Oh, yeah?:)
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:icond0lphintail:
D0LPHINTAIL Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2014
Oh yessssss. <3 <3
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Hm.
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:icond0lphintail:
D0LPHINTAIL Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Us mermen perfer sharing love in the deep rather then the dry. She'd like it there I'm sure.
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jan 6, 2014
Ah.
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:icond0lphintail:
D0LPHINTAIL Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
Deep as in "in the sea."
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2014
I know.:|
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IdrawwhenIwantto Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This has a fun nature to it...if that makes sense
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
I take it that you do not like it.:(


That's ok, I understand. Not everyone has to like everything.:no:


There's an uncensored version at Paperdemon/Red Curtain, if you're interested...
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IdrawwhenIwantto Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Actually, I did like the story
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:iconmoonlitinuyasha1985:
moonlitinuyasha1985 Featured By Owner Oct 18, 2013
Really?:O_o:
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